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Fiction – Running From Death

This is the beginning of a story inspired by Chuck Wendig’s “Choose Your Setting” challenge. It’s turning out to be longer than I thought it would be. Here’s part one.

Jackie looked around before creeping out of her shadowy hiding spot. The creatures hadn’t found her yet. Last she heard them, they were making a meal of someone or something in an alley just up the street. Taking to the fire escapes had been a good move. She made sure that no one was coming and that she had a good grip on her knife before she crossed the street. Refuge was just on the other side.

She broke into a run, her Vibram covered feet making no noise. The Starbucks was an acknowledged safe house and stockpile according to the graffiti code spray painted on its front. Travelers would put anything extra they had in places like this, no less than five percent of any good they carried that could be quantified. She got to the door and disabled the rather simple mechanism at the door’s top edge. The creatures didn’t have the manual dexterity to do it and they would end up getting a grenade to the face if they triggered it.

Once inside, she re-armed the booby trap. Only then did she breathe a sigh of relief. She slid the knife into its sheath and looked around. The only thing remaining here that harkened back to its original purpose was the coffee bar. Nearly anything else would have been used for scrap, from the espresso machine to the cash register. The fight against the creatures, she refused to call them zombies or vampires as some did, had been going on for five years and humanity was slowly losing ground. Cities were practically deserted, most opting to live in small enclaves in mountains or other terrain that was difficult for the creatures to navigate.

She walked to one of the plastic totes labeled “Water” and lifted the lid. Sure enough, there were bottles of varying sizes. She took one and spun the top off. It went done in one long pull. She smacked her lips and put the empty in her shoulder bag. She’d refill it at the next known good water spot she passed. Her hand came out of the bag with a handful of shotgun shells. She walked over to an ammo box and dropped them in. She didn’t have a gun, so there was no sense in keeping them.

She could get a little shuteye and resume her travels in the daylight. There would be less of a chance of being accosted. The creatures, former humans themselves, didn’t much care for the sun. It didn’t’ hurt them, but their eyes were sensitive. That would mean putting off getting to her goal. That could be the end of her. She had convinced herself that she could feel the nanites, or whatever it was that caused the change, working on her. She’d be one of them before much longer, if she didn’t make it to one of the CDC drop zones.

She didn’t even know for a fact that there’d be any Countermeasure-9 available for her to use. It was a chance she was willing to take. The thought of becoming a mindless cannibal didn’t appeal to her. Some people said that C-9 was just a suicide pill. Either way, her wait would be over in less than twenty four hours.

“Screw it. I deserve a break.” He voice echoed back to her. It shocked her. It sounded ragged to her own ears.

She started as she heard something scratching at the door. She drew her knife and cursed the fact that she didn’t have a gun or crossbow. She’d left her ranged arms with the group. it hadn’t been easy, but they all agreed it was for the best. “Be a cat. Be a cat. Be a cat.” For some reason humans and cats were the only ones affected by the nanites. Dogs could smell the oncoming change and responded viciously. If she had to face anything she’d rather it be a feline.

“I can’t manage the door. If there’s anyone in there, help me.”

The creatures eventually lost the ability to speak, but it wasn’t the first thing to go. She waited, debating whether or not to help. Finally, she gave in and opened the door.

The person waiting on the other side was small, but was definitely an adult. He held a gun that was likewise on the petite side, but he pointed it to the ground as soon as he saw her. “Thank goodness. It’s been too long since I’ve seen another person.”

She stepped aside and let him in. “I’m Jackie.”

The small man holstered his pistol and stuck out the hand that had been holding it. “I’m Leon.”

It was hard to make out details in the dark, but it seemed that his skin was darker than hers. “Good to meet you.”

He reached up and snapped on a headlamp. The light revealed that his skin was indeed dark brown. He walked over to the water bin and helped himself. “Odd to run into another person in this sector. This is my third time past here this month and this is the only time I’ve been able to get in.”

“Why in God’s name are you still around here?” The word sector seemed odd. He didn’t look military, but then again what did that mean?

“I could ask you the same question. Let’s just say that I’ve always been more of a city boy.” He moved to the ammo bin. “Yet another reason to carry a smaller pistol.” He held up a small box. “”People almost never donate the higher caliber stuff.” He tucked the box in a pouch on his jacket.

She thought about his answer and his unasked question. He was cagey, as anyone in their right mind was, but wasn’t without humor. That was a rare commodity in this world. “I’m a country gal, but I’m on something of a mission.”

He turned to her and raised an eyebrow. “I don’t know if I want to know the mission that would bring you into this hellhole.”

“Said the man who made the hellhole his home.” She smiled.

“Oh I’m crazier than a shithouse rat. You look pretty sane though. That means you’re either searching for someone or you need C-9.”

She took an involuntary step back.

“Well that answers that question.” His hand didn’t move towards his gun. “No need to be afraid. You don’t try and take a bite out of me and we’re all good.”

“How did you know?”

“I’ve run into a lot of folks like you, had that same look. I can smell desperation. I don’t think you’re going to have much luck. I’ll make you the same offer I made them. I’ll go with you, show you where the stockpile is, watch your back. If you make it, we’ll see what happens. If you don’t, I’ll put an end to your before you can hurt anyone.”

“How many people have taken you up on the offer?”

“Just one. He didn’t make it.”

She leaned back against the counter, strength gone from her legs. “I won’t lie to you, it’s a tempting offer. How far are we from the C-9?”

“About a twelve hour hike. Of course that’s with my legs.” He winked.

She couldn’t believe she’d run into someone that still had the will to joke. That it was so close was both a relief and a slight cause for alarm. She’d been told it was a little further away. “Do you know of a drop point other than the official one?”

“There are multiple drop points. I’m privy to most of them. The one you’re headed for is the one most people know about. There’s nothing there.”

“I’m lucky to have run into you then.” She had a bad feeling. If this guy was lying to her for some personal gain then she was well and truly screwed if she followed him. If she didn’t and he was telling the truth then she was equally screwed.

“I can sense your reluctance to trust me. I’ve got no way to convince you. It’s a matter of faith in humanity I guess. What have I got to gain from lying to you? If I wanted you dead I would have plugged you when I first stuck my head in here. There’s nothing in it for me if you wind up one of the stumblers.”

“What’s in it for you if I don’t?”

“Other than the obvious of keeping one on our side?” He shrugged. “You might live to show your gratitude in a useful way.”

Had many other folks said that, she would have been creeped out to the point of stabbing first and asking questions later.

Review – Implant by Michael Wallace and Jefferey Anderson (Podcast)

This book was recommended to my by my buddy Odin at View From Valhalla. It was less of an endorsement and more of a “try this one”.

Synopsis: Neurosurgeon Julia Nolan places cortical implants into the brains of field operatives to record data from their auditory and visual cortices. One of her subjects, an operative named Ian Westhelle, suffers a psychotic break and kills his handler before he can be recovered.

Julia tracks Ian to an asylum where the CIA warehouses insane former soldiers, scientists, and others with security risks too great for conventional psychiatric wards. Agents from the national intelligence directorate discover her snooping and target her for elimination.

A collaboration between bestselling writers Michael Wallace and Jeffrey Anderson, Implant is a heart-pounding thriller that will keep readers guessing until the final, chilling conclusion.

Production: This is a straight read. The audio is a little uneven places in terms of volume. I also wasn’t the biggest fan of the music that they chose for the podcast. The audio quality itself wasn’t bad, but nothing great either.

One thing proved problematic. As a note to all podcast fiction producers, for any scene break you should at least include a pause or some sort of musical cue. It lets your listener know what’s going on. More than once there was a POV shift or some other scene break within a chapter that left me momentarily confused.

Grade: C-

Cast: This is read by one of the authors. His vocal quality is generally fine. He’s definitely reading, rather than performing it. The problem is, his reading is flat. For the most part there’s very little energy or emotion. You can tell which characters he likes more as there’s a little more oomph. It occasionally gets in the way of the story.

Grade: C-

Story: This is a fairly well written bit of sci-fi/thriller. It’s a collaboration, but there’s very little indication of who wrote what. I’m not familiar with either author’s work, and it felt like a single writer was responsible. The writing was the only thing that kept me going past the first few episodes.

If you’re into thrillers with action, political intrigue, and a dash of SF I think you’ll enjoy it. The characters are reasonably well developed. A few of them will surprise you, in that they depart from the tropes.

The biggest strike is that it does take some time to get where it’s going. Some judicious editing would tighten up the story.

Grade: B-

Verdict: I can’t really recommend this as a podcast. If you want to experience the story your best bet might be buying the e-book. For $3.99 it’s worth it. Since I’m reviewing the podcast, my verdict’s grade reflects mainly that.

Grade: C-

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Review – Stolen Time by Keith Hughes (Podcast)

stolen_timeToday I’m reviewing Stolen Time, an audiobook/podcast novel by Keith Hughes. You can follow follow him on Twitter at http://twitter.com/edgizmo.

Synopsis: Ness Relevant has traveled through time before. Now once again he must use his machine to confront a determined foe. Only this time his personal stakes are even higher. Threatened by his future, he must find a way to save his wife and thwart a mad-man’s schemes for world conquest, or he’ll never regain his stolen time.

Production: The recording quality is very good. The music he chose for the intro is fitting.

Grade: B

Cast: Keith does this in a “reader’s theater” style, voicing all of the characters himself. He does a good job, as he did with his prior podcast outings.

Grade: B

Story: This is the sequel to Borrowed Time (click the title for a review I wrote). If you haven’t read or listened to the first story, go check it out. This is more of a thriller with science fiction elements than a true science fiction story. Keith does a good job building tension. Ness and his wife Angie are working together. She’s been kidnapped in the future and her only hope is for her and her husband to save her and for them both to get to the bottom of why she will have been kidnapped. Sound a little confusing? Well it is a time travel story.

Truthfully, though I enjoyed this story, it illuminates some of the problems I have with the whole “time travel” trope. You often end up with a fair amount of confusion in the characters’ efforts to either set the future or past right or prevent a paradox from happening. The listeners are treated with a little more information on how it works in this world, but since Ness isn’t an expert and the only real expert died in the first book, it remains something of a mystery. What’s important to know is that at one point Ness is chasing himself through time and helps himself to save himself more than once.

The drawback to this is the deus ex machina of the PDA is used too often. Ness gets in trouble? So long as he can reach the device he’s okay. The final confrontation in the book is a good example of this and of the confusion that can result. That served to rob some of the tension that the story could have had.

So what helped me to overcome that? Angie. I really enjoyed watching her deal with her husband’s adventures in time from the first book (something she wasn’t privy to) and I like watching her get a little bloodthirsty. I’m a sucker for women who kick butt. Ness wasn’t as well developed of a character in this one as he was in the first book. Maybe the inclusion of Angie as a more active character in the book contributed to that.

Grade: B-

Verdict: There were some definite weaknesses in Stolen Time, but I did enjoy it. If you want some lighter fare with a good dose of action then this might be the podcast for you. It gets moving quickly and if time travel is your bread and butter then add it to your MP3 player today.

Grade: B

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Review – One Way (Podcast)

OneWayCover_Plain_Half Today I’m reviewing One Way, an audiobook/podcast novel by Jeff Lane. You can go to his site here or follow him on Twitter at WriterJeffLane. This book falls into the thriller/sci fi genre, though more the former and less the latter. It deals with time travel but in a way that’s, to my mind, more fantasy than SF.

Synopsis: Barry Griffith doesn’t know it yet, but tonight is the night fate has chosen to be the night of his death… his murder.
At a gas station in the middle of nowhere, late at night, his wife Jenny appears… no car… no coat and looking older than when he saw her last. That’s because this is not the woman he received a good-bye kiss from this morning. This woman has been a widow for over four years and has made an impossible journey back in time to try to stop her husband’s murder.
Will they be able to escape the killers or does fate only have one plan… one possible outcome… ONE WAY?

Production: I listened to most of this over my car stereo (as I’m doing increasingly these days, but it was also in the ear buds. In both cases the audio is clean. I don’t recall any repeats. He uses music that’s appropriate to set mood. Occasionally the volume of the music is much louder than the spoken parts. That made me have to fiddle with volume a bit.

Grade: B+

Cast: Jeff did this as what I think I’ll call a dramatized read. Each character got their own voice, but it was all done by Jeff. Overall he did a good job, though he did an Indian accent that was a little too stereotypical.

Grade: B

Story: There’s a lot of jumping around in this. The story is told from multiple points of view, which for some can be off putting (and not just two or three POV characters). It’s also takes place in multiple timelines. The chapters more or less alternate between Barry in the “now” and Jenny in his future as she prepares to make the trip back in time. That jarred me a little at first, but as both timelines built to their climax, I kinda dug it. As we approached the end, there was one other thing that w rankled me a little. It suffers from the LOTR ending. Jeff ties up every single last loose end. This results in the end chapters being a little choppy and the overall feeling that it drug on. He also plays hard on the “is he dead YET?!?!” thing that you see in more than one slasher flick.

So was it any good? Yes. These few problems aside (and YMMV as to how problematic those problems are), this was a solid story, well told. I do like his vision of time travel, it being a more natural phenomenon. The most fun he has is with the “can you change the past?” question. I won’t give away his answer, but it left me satisfied.

Grade: B-

Verdict: I believe this is Jeff’s first podcast novel. He’s got two more: This Paper World and Crush Depth. I’ll be checking them out in that order. One Way and Crush Depth are available at Podiobooks. I didn’t stray from it once I started listening, though other podcasts beckoned. Well worth checking out.

Grade: B

Ginnie Dare: Blockade Runner – Snowflake Pt. 4

This is step four in the Snowflake method.

By this stage, you should have a good idea of the large-scale structure of your novel, and you have only spent a day or two. Well, truthfully, you may have spent as much as a week, but it doesn’t matter. If the story is broken, you know it now, rather than after investing 500 hours in a rambling first draft. So now just keep growing the story. Take several hours and expand each sentence of your summary paragraph into a full paragraph. All but the last paragraph should end in a disaster. The final paragraph should tell how the book ends.

I would love to know if you see any major problems or if there’s anything that interests you particularly about this process or the results so far! Sound off in the comments.

The settlers of the gas giant Rafe, one of the primary sources of fuel used in Perry-Gamblin drives, are seceding from the Commonwealth and have been cut off from aid by a government blockade. The Dares have been hired to run supplies to them in secret, able to do this thanks in part to modifications made using the Eshuan crystal. The succeed in getting through the first layer of the blockade without being spotted. Halfway between the outer ring of security and their destination they hit a mine that damages one of their cargo pods. They must make an emergency stop to repair it before they go on and they have to do it before Commonwealth forces arrive.

Ginnie and Jess to go EVA and repair one of the the damaged pod. It takes longer then they realize. The damage will not allow them to repair the connector and there’s no easy way to get it back on. Jess can jerry rig something, but before they’re able to the ship picks up an incoming scout. The only choice they have is to steer the pod to a nearby moon using emergency thrusters, and park it there. The Helena continues to Rafe and must maintain radio silence. They plan to get a tractor to come retrieve the pod along with Ginnie and Jess in 24 hours or less. Unfortunately the pod’s systems are damaged too and it crashes on the moon, injuring Jess.

Ginnie goes to find a place to set up an encrypted beacon she fashioned from the damaged parts of the pod’s radio. They don’t want to use it until the Helena is closer, but it needs to be on the highest point she can find. During her explorations she discovers what she thinks is a colony outpost. It strikes her as odd since there’s nothing important on this moon. She hacks into their channel and discovers that they’re terrorists, plotting to destroy the settlement making the Commonwealth and the Dares look responsible. Ginnie and Jess must find a way to stop them not only to save the colony, but to save their shipmates who will be caught in the attack and all without alerting the Commonwealth to their presence. They come up with a plan equal parts A-Team and MacGyver.

One of the agents working for the Liberation Front (President’s aid? Choochus?) gets a signal knows that the jig is up and sets the backup plan in motion. He alerts the President to the existence of the bomb and accuses the Dares of being in league with the Commonwealth. There’s a tense showdown. Jonas uses his military experience to help disable the bomb, but that doesn’t ultimately free them of suspicion. The President makes them leave and promises that they will work it out latter. While the Dares are on their way back Choochus alerts the Commonwealth to the Dare’s presence in the sector and via an improvised tracking device he planted gives them their coordinates. The Dares make it to the moon and succeed in recovering Ginnie, but a host of Commonwealth ships block their retreat.

The Dares reveal the presence of the Liberation front and their plans. Ginnie and Jes are able to produce the captured terrorists. Ginnie is able to get the tracking device and prove that it belonged to the president’s aid. The President is able to use this incident as leverage to ask for the blockade to be stopped. Colonel Delaney decides that having the terrorists is proof that the blockade is too much of a hardship on Commonwealth citizens. The Dares also offer to give up their “cloak” to the Commonwealth in exchange for amnesty for running the blockade. They are granted it, provisionally, and leave the sector for the return trip home.

Ginnie Dare: Blockade Runner

This is the beginning of the snowflake for the Ginnie Dare: Crimson Sands sequel.

Step One: While running a shipment of fuel to a planet who’s seceding from the Commonweatlh, Ginnie and Jess get stranded on the planet’s moon where they discover a plot to destroy the secession making the Commonwealth look responsible.

Step Two: The settlers of the gas giant Rafe, one of the primary sources of fuel used in Perry-Gamblin drives, are seceding from the Commonwealth and have been cut off from aid by a government blockade. The Dares have been hired to run supplies to them in secret, able to do this thanks in part to modifications made using the Eshuan crystal. A malfunction in the ship’s systems require Ginnie and Jess to go EVA and repair one of the pods, which results in the pod getting ejected along with the women causing them to be stranded on a nearby moon. While waiting for the ship to return and pick them up, they discover terrorists on the moon, plotting to destroy the settlement making the Commonwealth look responsible. Ginnie and Jess must find a way to stop them not only to save the colony, but to save their shipmates who will be caught in the attack and all without alerting the Commonwealth to their presence.

Tales from the Horsham Ghost Society/Haywire – Ebook Giveaway

First, congrats to Dave Avila for winning the last giveaway. I hope he enjoys it! Now onto the current contest.

The last week has been kind of a personal clustermug (and not in a good way) causing me to miss a week in the e-book giveaway. As such I need play a little catch up. So I’ve decided to give away TWO ebooks this week. And I don’t think the universe could have asked for a more diverse match up.

First up we have Tales from the Horsham Ghost Society by author Barry Skelhorn

Tales from the H.G.S, is a collection of six ghost stories, from the archives of the ‘Horsham Ghost Society’. James Clayton shares with us, some of his favourite tales that he has encountered over the years. From Haunted theatres, lost love to a truly personal haunting, this is just the beginning.

So pour yourself a drink, sink into your most comfortable chair, draw the curtains and lose yourself in the world of the H.G.S.

So if you like creepiness there you go. The other book is by long time friend of the blog, Justin Macumber. His book, Haywire, is one I’m currently reading and I HIGHLY recommend it.

A century ago, super-soldiers known as Titans drove alien invaders from the solar system and back to their home world. Now the Titans have returned, infected by a virus and compelled to destroy humanity. Will a scholar, her son, and the only Titan able to resist the infection find a way to stop them and save humanity from its own greatest weapon?

It more than lives up to that bit of cover copy.

So how do you get these? Merely leave a comment below and your name will be dropped into the virtual hat. Winner gets both!

I plan on giving away a book a week this year, but none of them will be my own. Why? Well, I believe in helping introduce people to new authors and nothing does that like FREE! The contests will be as simple as leaving a comment on the blog, or showing me that you’ve left a review on Amazon or Smashwords of books you’ve picked up in the past. I’ll try and change things up to keep them interesting, but by and large you won’t have to work hard.

If you’re an author and you’d like to pitch your hat into the ring, let me know. I’m not asking you to give me anything for free. I plan on buying your e-book from Amazon/Smashwords as a gift for the winner. So in addition to you getting your name out there, you’ll also get a sale for the contest. The most I can budget per week is $2.99, so if you have a book in the $.99-$2.99 price range let me know. I reserve the right to turn you down, but I will try and do so gently. I’d like to have a variety of genres represented.

If you have a free book and would like me to just get the word out I can do that, but you won’t be part of my contest. If your book is more expensive and you would like to donate a copy, that works too.

Shoot me an e-mail, a DM, or leave me a comment to enter your book.

Twin Bred – Ebook Giveaway

Today’s book is Twin-Bred by Karen A. Wyle.

Can interspecies diplomacy begin in the womb?

Humans have lived on Tofarn, planet of creeks and rivers, for seventy years, but they still don’t understand the Tofa. The Tofa are an enigma, from their featureless faces to the four arms that sometimes seem to be five. They take arbitrary umbrage at the simplest human activities, while annoying their human neighbors in seemingly pointless ways. The next infuriating, inexplicable incident may explode into war.

Scientist Mara Cadell’s radical proposal: that host mothers carry fraternal twins, human and Tofa, in the hope that the bond between twins can bridge the gap between species. Mara knows about the bond between twins: her own twin, Levi, died in utero, but she has secretly kept him alive in her mind as companion and collaborator.

Perhaps Mara should have expected the enigmatic Tofa to have their own reasons to support her project. Perhaps the ever-cynical Levi should have warned her that members of the human government might use her twins as weapons against the Tofa. Will the Twin-Bred bring peace, war, or something else entirely?

Science fiction with a sociological and psychological focus, TWIN-BRED follows in the footsteps of Ursula K. LeGuin’s The Left Hand of Darkness and Mary Doria Russell’s The Sparrow.

What was the first science fiction novel you read?

I plan on giving away a book a week this year, but none of them will be my own. Why? Well, I believe in helping introduce people to new authors and nothing does that like FREE! The contests will be as simple as leaving a comment on the blog, or showing me that you’ve left a review on Amazon or Smashwords of books you’ve picked up in the past. I’ll try and change things up to keep them interesting, but by and large you won’t have to work hard.

If you’re an author and you’d like to pitch your hat into the ring, let me know. I’m not asking you to give me anything for free. I plan on buying your e-book from Amazon/Smashwords as a gift for the winner. So in addition to you getting your name out there, you’ll also get a sale for the contest. The most I can budget per week is $2.99, so if you have a book in the $.99-$2.99 price range let me know. I reserve the right to turn you down, but I will try and do so gently. I’d like to have a variety of genres represented.

If you have a free book and would like me to just get the word out I can do that, but you won’t be part of my contest. If your book is more expensive and you would like to donate a copy, that works too.

Shoot me an e-mail, a DM, or leave me a comment to enter your book.

Caveat Veritatem – New SF Anthology

I have a new anthology of some of my science fiction short stories available at Smashwords and Amazon! Three of these stories are new to the e-book realm. If you purchased either of the other two, in any format from any store, please contact me and I will be glad to give you a 50% off coupon. Here’s the information.

Truth is a dangerous thing. A little of it goes a long way and it can come back to bite you. That’s why our society (and most societies I would imagine) encourage the polite, little lie. Thus my title for this anthology “Caveat Veritatem” or “Beware of the Truth”. Here are five stories that tell various truths, no matter the consequences for you or for the characters.

“Vicious Cycle” – Wherein a leader is forced to choose between repetition and redemption.
“X Marks the Spot” – Mark uncovers a long buried box that unlocks him. This is one of the prequel stories in my Children of Legend series.
“Truth Is No Stranger to Fiction” – They say there’s some truth at the core of every story, even the most absurd ones. That comes back to haunt a publisher of such tales.
“Tell Me Why” – Can love be outlawed in order to save humanity?
“Hell Hath No Fury” – Don’t mess with Mother Nature or her defenders. Mike learns that lesson the hard way when both attempt to blow him and his experimental craft out of the air.

Compass Rose Pt. 2 – WIP

This story takes place in the same universe as X Marks the Spot and will be my own take on a super hero universe. It will owe a little bit to the Wild Cards series of books. This is a WIP and is covered by the Creative Commons License below.

Read Pt. 1 here.

Ben flinched.

Jackson balled up his fist. “Nah. We were just hanging out and this little queer got too nosy for its own good.”

I drew back at the smell of cigarette smoke on his breath. “Sneaking a smoke out behind the school and you got caught. No reason to beat up a little kid.”

“She was going to tell the teachers. Things got out of hand.” Jackson bent down as though to help Dawn up.

“You leave her alone and get the hell out of here, before I finish what she started. I saw Mr. Reed out by the shop class. He could be here in two minutes and you two would be out of school for the rest of the year.”

“No. You can’t do that. I won’t be able to run track and we’re doing good this year.” As handsome as Ben was, his world was all about that asphalt oval. “You can’t tell on us. She’ll be okay.”

“I won’t tell if you just get lost.”

Jackson punched Ben in the chest. “Come on big guy, let’s leave these two queers alone.” He looked down at me. “I’ll talk with you later.”

The boys turned and left the yard, and I stooped down again.

“Can you stand up, buddy?” I rested one hand on her shoulder.

“I… I think so. If you help.”

I could tell that she was going to have a black eye at least. The nose bleed wasn’t bad. The way she winced when I got her to her feet meant that she had a few bruises around her ribs. Together we eased to the building.

Dawn stopped us halfway. “You’re not gonna tell are you?”

“Do you want me to?”

“No. I think that would just make things worse.”

There was a lot of wisdom there. Even then I realized that and how horrible that truth was. Both of us had seen movies and heard talks about bullying, but on the schoolyard tattletales always paid double. If I told then she would get another beating whether she did or not. “I’ll leave that up to you. If you tell then I’ll say that I saw everything. If you decide not to then mum’s the word.”

Mr. Reed was still talking to the Robotics teacher. When they saw us come in, Mr. Reed said something I’d never heard him say in class. We were whisked to the office in short order. Dawn claimed that she had fallen from the monkey bars. That was plausible, but I would know later in life that the look Ms. Mayhew had given her was called incredulous. We would all know by the summer of our Sophomore year that her previous husband had beaten her more than once. That’s why she was a Ms. now.

Once everything was calm, I excused myself.

“Are you sure that you don’t want one of us to take you home?”

I shook my head. “No, thank you, Mr. Reed. I only live a couple of blocks away and there’s still plenty of light.”

“Okay. But be careful.”

I nodded solemnly. In a world where you could get a beating for being in the wrong place at the wrong time though, no amount of care was capable of protecting you from getting hurt eventually.

I left by the back way again. There was a shortcut to my house through the woods at the edge of the school property. I could get there in around eight minutes. Four minutes into my walk I hit the thicket and smelled smoke. That was when I felt something hit me between the shoulder blades. I blacked out before I even felt my face hit the thorn bush.

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